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pj202718 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015
Happy birthday.
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AfroJedi1 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2015
Happy Birthday! :)
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KayleetheDragacron Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Happy early birthday!
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pj202718 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Happy Birthday.
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Icelord2314 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Happy Birthday!
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KayKayTwilie Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Happy Birthday!! :D :D :D
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AfroJedi1 Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Happy Birthday!
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Icelord2314 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I must say, you are a very interesting writer.  Keep up the great work.
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Falljoydelux Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hey! Made something else for ya:



I've also got more sketches of the pony mercs that I'll get up soon
Enjoy :iconhurrhurrplz:
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:iconxaldensmutanthamster:
Not bad, pretty well written so far. The only thing I can really say needs improvement is the accents. Accents are kind of a tricky thing in writing, you should use them a bit more sparingly. They're good for identifying which character is speaking, but if used too often can make it kind of tough to read, y'know?

Other than that they're pretty good. Put me in a good mood to see someone sill gives a damn. : )
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